【帮忙改一篇英文作文,只改语法.Eventhoughtherearemanyreasonsforusinganimalstofindoutatreatmentfordiabetesinhumanbeings,manypeoplearguethatthereisnoproblemwithusinganimalstodoexperiment.Firstly,researchersf】|小学作文问答-问答网

【帮忙改一篇英文作文,只改语法.Eventhoughtherearemanyreasonsforusinganimalstofindoutatreatmentfordiabetesinhumanbeings,manypeoplearguethatthereisnoproblemwithusinganimalstodoexperiment.Firstly,researchersf】

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帮忙改一篇英文作文,只改语法.

Eventhoughtherearemanyreasonsforusinganimalstofindoutatreatmentfordiabetesinhumanbeings,manypeoplearguethatthereisnoproblemwithusinganimalstodoexperiment.Firstly,researchersfoundthat"dogsshowclinicalsignsofdiabetessimilartohumansanditiseasytofindouttheeffectivetreatmentinhumanandinthefuturethatthedevicewillbecomesmallerandlessinvasive"(Adams,2011,Para8).Thereisnodoubtthatthetreatmentfordiabeteswasabigstepfortheresearchers."Affectedanimalsareunabletoutilizesugarintheirbloodstreambuttheycangiveahormonethathelpscellsturnsugarintoenergy."(Adams,2011,Para2).Themostinspiringthingwasthat"theVeterinariansfindthatwiththistypeofdiabetesthatissimilarlytothewayhumansaretreatedwhowithinsulininjectionsandalow-carbohydratediet".(Adams,2011,Para2).Secondly,accordingtothearticle"ExercisesHelpPeoplewithDiabetes"theUniversityofMissouri-Columbiadonotfindthat:"lifestylechangecanbringsstrongimprovementsbutthestudyalsofoundthatwomendidnotimproveasmuchasmen."(Jennifer,Faddis,2007,Para6).Soitdonotmeanthatifwedoexercise,peoplecanchangeormakesomeimprovementindiabetes.Also,peopledonotagreedwiththeresearchers'effectivenessaboutthebackgroundinformationsaboutthebenefits.(Hareyan,2008,Para2.).Allthesedifficultiesmakeitdifficultforresearcherstofindoutabetterwaytocurediabetes.

However,eventhoughthereareseveralargumentstheseisnoproblemusinganimalsforfindingouthowtotreatdiabetes,othersstillthinkthatitisunnecessarytouseanimals.Oneofthebasicproblemswasthattheythinkthat"dogsarenotusuallythesameashumanbeings,andthemostimportantthingwasthatpeoplecannotpredictwhatwillcarryforusinthefuture."(Adams,2011,Para6).Ifpeopleuseanimalstotreatdiabetes,maybeinthefuture,peoplewillhavesomeotherdiseasesthatdonotknowbefore.Asthesethingshappen,peoplecannotfindabetterwaytostop.Themostimportantthingisthatanimalsarealsobreathingeveryday.Theyalsoneedabetterenvironmenttolive,sohowcantreattheminsucharudeway?Itisunfairtothemandhumanbeingsaremerciless.Tobehonest,peopleshouldtreatthemfriendly,

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　　Eventhoughtherearemanyreasonsforusinganimalstofindoutvaryingtreatmentsfordiabetesinhumanbeings,manypeoplearguethatthereisnoproblemwithusinganimalstoconducttheexperiments.Firstofall,researchersfoundthat'dogsshowclinicalsignsofdiabetessimilartohumansanditiseasytofindouttheeffectivetreatmentinhumanandinthefuturethatthedevicewillbecomesmallerandlessinvasive'(Adams,2011,Para8).Thereisnodoubtthatthetreatmentfordiabeteswasabigstepfortheresearchers.'Affectedanimalsareunabletoutilizesugarintheirbloodstreambuttheycangiveahormonethathelpscellsturnsugarintoenergy.'(Adams,2011,Para2).Themostinspiringthingwasthat'theVeterinariansfindthatwiththistypeofdiabetesthatissimilarlytothewayhumansaretreatedwhowithinsulininjectionsandalow-carbohydratediet'.(Adams,2011,Para2).Secondly,accordingtothearticle'ExercisesHelpPeoplewithDiabetes'theUniversityofMissouri-Columbiadidnotfindthat:'lifestylechangecanbringsstrongimprovementsbutthestudyalsofoundthatwomendidnotimproveasmuchasmen.'(Jennifer,Faddis,2007,Para6).Soitdoesnotmeanthatifweexercise,peoplecanovercomeormakesomemedicalimprovementindiabetes.Also,peopledonotagreedwiththeresearchers'effectivenessaboutthebackgroundinformationsrelatingthebenefits.(Hareyan,2008,Para2.).Allthesedifficultiesmakeitdemandingandlaboriousfortheresearcherstofindoutabetterwaytocurediabetes. 　　However,eventhoughthereareseveralargumentstheseisnoproblemusinganimalsforfindingouthowtotreatdiabetes,othersstillthinkthatitisunnecessarytouseanimals.Oneofthebasicproblemswasthattheythinkthat'dogsarenotusuallythesameashumanbeings,andthemostimportantthingwasthatpeoplecannotpredictwhatwillcarryforusinthefuture.'(Adams,2011,Para6).Ifpeopleuseanimalstotreatdiabetes,maybeinthefuture,peoplewillhavesomeotherdiseasesthatisnotknowntousnow.pAsthesethingshappen,peoplecannotfindabetterwaytostop.Themostimportantthingisthatanimalsarealsobreathingeveryday.Theyalsoneedabetterenvironmenttolive,sohowcantreattheminsuchabrutalway?Itisunfairtothemthathumanbeingsaresomercilesstothem.Tobehonest,peopleshouldtreatthemkindly,becauseitwillhelpustolivebetter,moralityandconsciencealsocomeintoplay.Notonlyforthisreason,ifweusedogs,weshouldknowthat'ifhumanbeingsdonotusecorrectly,ourcomplicationscanarise".(Adams,2011,Para6).Everycoinhastwosides,ifwecannotcontrolthetreatmentprocesscorrectly,theanimalswilldie,andatthesametime,theresearcherswillhaveabiggerproblemthattheydisnothavebeforetoface. 　　希望能帮你,专门用了复杂的单词:)我汉语虽然不怎么好,我擅长英语.现在住在英国^^(7年)