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MyIdol
MyIdolisascientist.HisnameisYuanLongping.Hisdateofbirthis1930,9.Hisbirthplaceisbeijing.Heisofmediumbuildandheisofmediumheight.Hishobbysareplayingthewiolinandplayingsports.Heiswerygoodatswimmingandplayingvolleyball.Hiswhyfamousis"FatherofHybridRice".In2001,hehasChina'sStateSupremeScienceandTechnology.In2004,hehasWorldFoodPrize.Ithinkheisaverygreatscientist.
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