英语作文求大侠帮忙改一下小女子这厢有礼了~
因为后天就要考试了希望改的详细一点很多是百度翻译出来的有很多不通顺的地方见笑啦
话说因为网上很少有这个题目的原创作文要是有同学想要拿走并不介意(以前就被拿过T-T)麻烦告诉我一声想知道一下自己的水平
THEPERSONIAIMIRE
Everyonehashisheroesinhismindthatwillhaveaneffectonus.ThepersonIadmiremostismysister.Sheisnotonlyverykind,butalsoveryperseveringandstudious.
Mysisterisstudyingabroad.Assoonassherepatriates,shewillgotoourgrandparents’homeandhelpthemtheworkaroundthehouse.Also,sheoftenhelpsmewithmyhomework.Everytimepeoplepraisehersuccess,shealwayslaughsaway.Sheoftenhelpsinchildren’shomeasavolunteer.Beforethis,herscoreisnotverygood.Butshestillpersistsinstudyinghard.Atlast,shewasgraduatedwithhonorsfromMiddleSchoolAttachedHarbinNormalUniversity.Shemetwithmanydifficultswhilestudyingabroad.However,sheinsistedwhileworkingontheedgeoflearningandfinishedschool.
Asthesayinggoes“Livingwithoutanaimslikesailingwithoutacompass.”Thankstomysister,nowIknowIshouldhaveakind、perseveringandstudiousheart.Therefore,Iwanttobecomeasoutstandingasher.
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