请帮我修改现在过去式错误与拼写错误等……
DearNatalie,
Idon’tknowonebutthisseemslikethelastletteryou’llgetfromme,soIwouldhavelot’softhingstotalkaboutwithyou.WehadmovedtoAlcatrazeforhalfofyearnowanddoyoulikehere?Alternatively,doyoumissouroldhome?Therearelot’sofquestionsIwanttoaskbutit'sgonnabetoomoreformetowriteoutandforyoutowriteitback,soI’lljustbesimple.
ThefirstthingIwanttotalkaboutiswhathadhappenedonthedayofyourbirthday.Whichshouldbe16thyearsoldbutfor“real”10.IbetmomhadfeltalittlebitsadaboutwhatIhaddone,whatshesaidascreatingadisturbance.However,Iamjusttellingthetruthinsteadofbeinganerdandliewiththemaboutyourage.
Ihopeyouwon’tmindthat,ordoyouthinkIhadrubbedyourbithday?IamsorryofwhatIhaddone,pleasedon’tmindbecauseifit’snotonyourbirthdaythenitwillloseit’s“power”:toletmomknowhowbigtheproblemis.
Haveagoodnightsleep,Nat!
--Moose
内容如上,本人两分钟内快速的写了一篇文章可没有时间检查所以请帮我检查一下过去式现在式是否有误最后将完好无损的文章交到我面前.如果将问题标出来更多加分
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