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一位同学写的英语作文(初中),ProblemsAmongTeenagersAsateenager.Ihavealotofproblemssuchashomeworkandsomethings.Inmyschool,therearealotofhomeworks.Wealwaysshoulddothehomeworkuntilthe11o'clock.sometimeeven12
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一位同学写的英语作文(初中),

ProblemsAmongTeenagers

Asateenager.Ihavealotofproblemssuchashomeworkandsomethings.Inmyschool,therearealotofhomeworks.Wealwaysshoulddothehomeworkuntilthe11o'clock.sometimeeven12o'clock.Ifeelverytriedforthehomework.Butifindawaytochangethis.Icandothehomeworkintheclass.Thenusesomesentencesthatletmeafraid.Ifeelverysadevenhatetheclassmates.Ithinkoutawayaboutthisthing.Donottothey.Itisabestwayforme.

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  我的更正都在文章中你看看吧~   ProblemsAmongTeenagers   Asateenager.Ihavealotofproblemssuchas(加一个with,haveproblemwithsth.)homeworkandsome(some改为other会比较好)things.Inmyschool,therearealotofhomeworks.Wealwaysshould(把should和always换下位置或者改成wearealwayssupposedto)dothehomeworkuntilthe(跟后面的12o'clock一样此处不用the)11o'clock.sometimeeven12o'clock.Ifeelverytried(单词拼写错误你想写的应该是tired)for(对某事厌烦是betiredof此处用错了)thehomework.Butifind(havefound这里可以用现在完成进行时态)awaytochangethis(这里完全可以加一个situation).Icandothehomeworkintheclass.Thenusesomesentencesthatletmeafraid.(这句话不能理解是不是你想写你的同学们说你这样不好首先单词错误they而不是then按你的意思可以改成theysaidsomethingthatmademefeelafaid.)Ifeel(用过去式felt)verysad(此处加一个and)evenhate(过去式哦hated)theclassmates(可以用them代替).Ithink(过去式哦thought)outaway(改成tosolvethisproblem可能会比较好哦)aboutthisthing.Donottothey.(这里是不是想表达不理他们?这样的话可以连着后面那句用itisthebestwayformetoregardlessofthem)Itisabestwayforme.   我觉得整体来说还是写的不错的.不过在今后的写作中要注意时态还有单词拼写的问题.   ps:最好不好在课堂上写作业咯因为这样也许你就会漏掉老师在课堂上讲的内容啦不要因小失大哦~   加油!
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