帮忙为英语作文改错.
Okay,asyoucansee,IdecidetosetaboutwritingsomeofmyjournalinEnglishfromthisweek.Tobehonest,it'sreallyabigchallengeformewithmyrecentEnglishlevel.SonowIhavetocheckwhatI'vejustwroteafterIwrotedowneverysinglesentense.AnywayI'mdoingitnow,it'sthemostimportantpoint,anddefinitelyifyoucouldmentionitwhenI'vemadeanymistake,itwouldbemypleaturereceivingthat.
这段话有何不妥,或者有什么更好的表达方式.
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