下面的一段话语法有问题吗?应该怎么改?
Mye-friend
Ihaveane-friend.ShenameisLily.Sheis12yearsold.Sheisaprettygirl.ShelivesinCanada.ShecanspeakEnglish.Shehasalotofhobbies.Shelikesskating.Shecanskateverywell.ShelikesEnglishandArt.Iloveher.
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