谁能帮我改一下英语作文(高中)?
OurNewProduct-Pancake
Ourfactorymakeanewfood-Pancakenow.Itmakesbyrice、maize、grease、creamandsoon.Andwemakemanydifferentkindsofit.Andweusetheespeciallywaystomakeit,justlikefringorbaking.So,ourpancakeisverydelicious.Wewilltastethegoodsmellinlongtimeswhenweeatit.Andtheimportantisthatweaddmanynutrientmaterials.Itisgoodforoldoryoungpeople.So,manypeoplealllikeeatingit.Theediblemethodsisthatisopenthatisfood,orregardasasnack.Pleasebuyitandtasteit,youwillfellgoodofit!
最好能给一下得分(满分25)谢谢……
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