帮我点评一下一篇高中英语小文章
Onthefirstdayofschool,myhomeroomteacherassignedmewithadeskmate,agirlnamedLiuMin.
Dressedinreallyplainclothes,shelookedjustlikeanyothergirl.Ididn’tthinkshehasanyspecialqualitiesinhersoIdidn’tnoticeheratall.
However,soonIfoundouthowwrongIwas.Shewasveryhard-working;thus,shedidwellineverysubject.Shewasalsoawarm-heartedpersonwhocouldn’tresisthelpingothers.ShegavemealotofhelponmystudiesandI’mreallygratefulforeverythingshehaddoneforme.
I’mreallyluckythatwebecameexcellentfriendsovertheyearsandIhopewe’llalwaysbefriends.
要求点评有精彩词语句式结构看点
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