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托福TPO1的综合作文,求批改

1细节2point出来了没3格式上可以吗?

Inthelecture,theprofessorcastsdoubtonthepointofthereadingpassagethatfour-dayworkweekhasabeneficialeffectonthecountry,companiesandindividuals.Theprofessorclaimsthatthenewpolicyhavenoeffectatall.

First,thereadingpassageshowsthatthenewpolicywillincreaseprofitsandefficiencythroughreductionoferrorsandsoon,whereastheprofessorholdsthatthenewpolicywillforcethecompaniestospendmore.Tomakenewemployeessuitableforthecompany,thecompanywillprovidetraining,medicalbenefits,officespaceandmorecomputerwhichwillcostsomuchmoney.

Second,theprofessorhaveadifferentviewonthereadingpassagethatfollowingthenewpolicy,therearemorejobstoprovidewhichwilldecreasetheunemploymentrates.Theprofessorarguesthatthecompaniesmightasktheiremployeestoworkovertimeordothesameamountofworkinthefour-dayworktime.Inthisstate,noextrajobscouldbeprovided.

Third,thereadingpassageindicatesthatlessworktimeandmoreleisuretimewillimprovethequalityofemployees’life.Onthecontrary,theprofessorsuggeststhatlessworktimewillmakethemhavelesschancetopromoteandcouldbethefirstonetobedismissedintheeconomycrisis.Virtually,lessworktimecannotimprovequalityoftheirlife.

施鸿宝回答:
  楼主写的不错,分论点都阐述得比较清晰~~   关于格式,其实有好几种英文论文的标准格式.我一直采用段与段之间空一行,段首定格写.建议楼主每段结束后可以空一行再起新的一段,这样看起来比较舒服~~   综合写作其实主要是一个套路,掌握方法后并不难,考试中将lecture的三个点听清楚就没有问题了,然后就是模板了.   建议楼主在达到这个程度后可以将复习中心转移到独立写作或其他部分.   祝楼主能取得理想的成绩~~
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