请英语高手帮我点评这篇四级作文,

1现在电视上充斥着各种选秀节目

2选秀节目流行的原因

3你的观点

TalentShowonTV

Nowadays,withthedevelopingeconomy,moreandmorepeoplepaytheirattentiontotheentertainment.Inthissituation,allkindsoftalentshowsareappearedonTV.Therearetworeasonswhytalentshowsbecomesopopularinthefollowing.

First,peoplebecomerichersotheyhaveencoughmoneynotonlytotheeatandwarmth,butalsototheentertainment.Inthemordenworld,thepersonworksohardtoearnmoneythattheyneedtorelaxthemselvessometimes.Theappearanceofthetalentshowsfittheirneed.Moreover,theteensinthistimearemoreinterestinthetalentshows.Theyaresoactivethattheyspendalotoftimeonallkindsofshows.Moreandmoreteensareabsorbedinthetalentshows,sotheshowsbecomemoreandmorepopular.

AsfarasI'mconcerned,IliketowatchthetalentshowsonTV.Ithinkitisverycomfortable.Thetalentshowsaregoodfortheteensinmymind.Theshowsalwaysholdonsummerorwinterdayssothestudentscanplayapartonthembecausetheyalsohavealongholidayatthesametime.Theycanentertainthemselvesafteralongtimestudyandalsocanlearnalotofthingsthroughtheshows.