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请英语高手们帮我点评一下我的这篇英语四级作文(语法、用词或者其他)万分感谢

1:一次性塑料袋曾被广泛使用

2:使用一次性塑料袋带来的问题

3:限制使用一次性塑料袋的意义

LimitingtheUseofDisposablePlasticBags

Inthepastyears,thedisposableplasticbagswasusedtopersonextensively,especiallypeoplewhobuyinginsupermarket.Therearemanyproblemswithdisposableplasticbagswasthrownawayeverywhere,anditwillcausetheWhitePollution.Andsecondly,plasticbagsarenoteasytodecompose,soitwillleaveinourlandalongtimeandpolluteourgroundwater.Lastly,somepeoplealwayschoosetoburnthedisposableplasticbagswhenitismany.

Astheplasticbagstakesmoreandmoreproblems,ourgovernmentmakealawtolimittheuseofdisposableplasticbags.Formypart,Ithinktheactioncantakemanybenefitstoperson.Tobeginwith,itwillreducetheproductofdisposableplasticbagsandasthepriceincreased,peoplewillcontroltheirdesireofuseit.Inaddition,itcanprotectourenvironmentbetterandensureourhealth.Inaword,itisabeneficialthingthatitcanmakeourlifebetter.

郝永敬回答:
  供参考   取消括号内文字   Inthepastyears,thedisposableplasticbagswere(was)usedbypeople(toperson)extensively,especiallythose(people)whobuy(ing)thingsin   supermarket.Therearemanyproblemswithdisposableplasticbagsbeing(was)   thrownawayeverywhere,(anditwillcause)thuscausingtheWhitePollution   .Andsecondly,plasticbagsarenoteasytodecompose,sothey(it)willremain(leave)inourlandalongtimeandpolluteourgroundwater.Lastly   ,somepeoplealwayschoosetoburnthedisposableplasticbagswhentheyhavetoo(itis)many(1).   Astheplasticbagscreated(takes)moreandmoreproblems,ourgovernment   made(make)alawtolimittheuseofdisposableplasticbags(2).Asfaras   Iamconcerned(Formypart),Ithinktheactioncanbring(take)manybenefits   topeople(person).Tobeginwith,itwillreducetheproduction(product)   ofdisposableplasticbagsandasthepriceincreases(increased),people   willcontroltheirdesireofusingthem(useit).Inaddition,itcanprotect   betterbothourenvironment(better)and(ensure)ourhealth.Inshort(aword),itisabeneficialthingthatitcanmakeourlifebetter.   (1)或whentherearetoomany.   (2)时态不清楚,政府通过法例了吗?还是计划这样做?   如果还未能   Astheplasticbagshavecreatedmoreandmoreproblems,ourgovernment   willpassalawtolimittheuseofdisposableplasticbags.
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