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求高手帮我修改这篇英语作文(CET4)顺便打一下分数1、各大学开设了各种各样的选修课2、学生因为各种原因选择了不同的选修课3、以你自己为例……WhatElectivestoChooseNowadays,therearevari
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求高手帮我修改这篇英语作文(CET4)顺便打一下分数

1、各大学开设了各种各样的选修课

2、学生因为各种原因选择了不同的选修课

3、以你自己为例……

WhatElectivestoChoose

Nowadays,therearevariouselectivesin

colleaguesanduniversitiesthatstudentscouldchoosenotonlyassociatewhit

theirprofessionalbutalsotheirinterestin.

Reasonsfordifferentoptions,ofcourse,

areinabundance.Somestudentstendtochoosethecoursesforprofessional

requirement,theysupportprofessionalknowledgeenhance.Otherspayattention

toindividualinterest,theyharbortheidealearningisinordertoexpandinghorizons.

Frommyownperspective,theidealisthe

twoelementscombinedtogether.ButwhenIhavetomakeadecision,Iwould

pickupthebestchoosetomyinterestandprofessionalrequirement.Onlyinthiswaycanweenjoyaenrichcampuslife.

李妍峰回答:
  大概改了一下,原文写的不错,意思很到位,分数不会低.   WhatElectivestoChoose   Nowadays,therearevariouselectivesin   colleaguesanduniversitiesthatstudentscouldchoosenotonlyassociatewhit   theirprofessionalbutalsotheirinterestin.   这里修改professions和interests   Reasonsfordifferentoptions,ofcourse,   areinabundance.Somestudentstendtochoosethecoursesforprofessional   forprofessional改成forjob   requirement,theysupportprofessionalknowledgeenhance.Otherspayattention   theysupport改成Thesecourseswouldenhancetheirknowledge.   toindividualinterest,theyharbortheidealearningisinordertoexpandinghorizons.   theyharbor改成theideaistoexpandtheirvisionsinparticularfields.   Frommyownperspective,theidealisthe   twoelementscombinedtogether.ButwhenIhavetomakeadecision,Iwould   pickupthebestchoosetomyinterestandprofessionalrequirement.Onlyinthiswaycanwe   Iwould改成Iwouldpickthemostsuitablecoursestofitintomyinterestandjobrequirement.   enjoyaenrichcampuslife.
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