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MyE-pal
Iwas12whenIlearnedhowtouseInternettochat.Myfirste-friendcalledJim.
HeisEnglish.Heisalsoamiddleshoolstudent.Heiskindandfriendly.Ilearnalotfromhim.Iamhappyhim.
SuchashowtosendE-mailandhowtousetheInternetinmystudy.MostimportantweoftenchatinEnlish.WithhishelpmyEnglishimprovesveryquickly.AndIcantypeveryfastnow.Ilikemynetfriendverymuch.
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