有篇雅思小作文哪位高手帮忙看看能得计分,有错请批评指正(这是剑桥雅思4Text3里的WRITINGTASK1)
Thechartappearsthatthedifferentsuitationofpost-schoolwerereachedbymenandwomeninAustraliain1991
Formthegraphic,wecanseethatwomenandmenhavealargeofgapinsomecategories,especiallyinskilledvicationaldiploma,whichhave90%menwhowereapproximately9timesasmuchaswomenin1991.Inundergraduatediploma,howere,thepercentageofwomenweredoubledthanmenwhostoodat40%.Themostsimiliarotiesbetweenthepercentageofwomenandmenholddegree’ssuititioninAustraliaexistsinBachelor’sdegree.Andthen,themenwithpostgraduatediplomaweremorethanwemen,70%and30%respectively.Asthesametime,inMaster’sdegreecategory,numberofwomenlessthanmenwhoattained60%
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