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Mycolorfulwinterholiday
IhaveaterificWinterHoliday,becauseIhaveagoodtimewithmyfriendsandmyparents.Ididmyhomeworkatmybrothers’house.SometimesIwenttotheparkwithmybrothers.AndsometimesIwatchedTV,butIlovegoingtoseeamoviebest,itwasreallyexciting!Ialsoplayedwithmylittlesister.Ourfamilydidn'twenttotravel,becausetheweatherwastoobadtogosightseeing.OnSpringFestival,Ieatmeatanddumplingswithmyparents,mygrandparents,mysisters,mybrothers,myauntsandmyuncles.Itwasveryreallycoldoutside.Ifeelledalittlepityaboutthis.ButIwasstillveryhappy,Igotalotofmoneyfrommyfamilies.WewatchedTV.Ilikethewinterholidayverymuch.Ithinkthiswinterholidayiscolorfulandgreat.WhataboutyouLet'ssharethelifewitheachothertogether!
Thissummer,Ihadagoodvacation.
Iwenttotheseawithmyparents,mygrandparentsandmybrother,Jack.
Theweatherwashot.Thereweremanypeopleonthebeach.
Jackandmyfatherswaminthesea.Itwassocool.
Andmygrandmotherhadapicniconthebeach.Shewasveryhappy.
MymotherandIplayedbeachvolleyball.Ithoughtitwasgreat.
Whowasreadnewspapersbehindmygrandmother
Oh,itwasmygrandfather.
Wethoughtwehadaexcitingvacation.
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