Lastsundaytonightat8pm,YouheldapartyforthetwoteachersfromtheUSA.Atthewelcomeparty,studentswereveryhappy.somestudentsweredancingtheydancedtogetherwithhappniess,someweresinginghappily,otherswerereading.theteacherwereveryhappy.
Yesterday(Sunday)evening,weheldapartytowelcometwonewforeignteachersfromAmerica.Duringtheparty,allthestudentswereveryhappy.TheysungEnglishsongswithteachers.Theydancedandreadpoems.Thetwoforeignteachersplayedandtalkedwithstudentsallthetime.TheywereverykindandtheywereinterestedinChineseculture.Wereallyenjoyedourselvesyesterday.
Lastnight,wehadawelcomepartyfortwoforignteacherfromAmerica.Somestudentsdanced,somesongsingsandothersread.Thetwoforignteacherwereverykind,theytalkedwithusallthetime.Wewereveryhappy.Wehadagreattimewiththeforignteacher.
对1楼说:
你的‘Lastsundaytonight'是病句,tonight是‘今晚’的意思,所以不能用在过去发生的事情中。还有昨晚的party应该没有对今天的事情造成影响,所以不应该用完成时,而用过去时。
Yesterdayevening,wewereontheplayground,willtwoAmericanteachersmettingawelcomeparty.Attheparty,myclassmatesandmeweredanced,sang,recitedpoems.Wewereveryhappy!