我的六级习作片段写的如何?
Thewarmbloodsplasheduponherface,Jiemeiregrettedforgivinghersonsuchaserverepunch.However,asshefoundherbreastexplodedalargeskin,andherson’scrotchstuckupstraightly,sherecalledsomethingrubbingalongherthighsoverthepassionatetime.shecouldn’tconstrainthewrathinward,coveringuptheboobsandpickedupabranch,lashedonherson’sbackregardlessofhisinsidewound.
“youbeast,howcouldIgiveabirthtoyoubeast,whatdidyoudotomejustbefore?Iamyourbiologicalmotherwhoboreandrearedyou,howcouldyoudosuchthingstoyourmum?
Thewhiplashwasfallingdownupontheteenbodylikethepouring.Jiemeicried:”whereisthevirtueyouoncehad?Yourfatherwasslainbythefoesofyourfamily,youhaven’tavengedhimbutrevolted,doingthistoyourmother,areyouahumanbeing?”
外国人都说我写的好呢?他说我写的东西让他抓狂,看来我写的还是很生动的
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