【求雅思大作文修改...顺便打分Rapidlyincreasingpetrolpricecouldprotecttheenvironmentandreleasetrafficpressuretosomeextent.Douagreeordisagree?Giveyouropinion.In21stcentury,thepetrolpriceisrapidlygrowing,leavingase】|小学作文问答-问答网

【求雅思大作文修改...顺便打分Rapidlyincreasingpetrolpricecouldprotecttheenvironmentandreleasetrafficpressuretosomeextent.Douagreeordisagree?Giveyouropinion.In21stcentury,thepetrolpriceisrapidlygrowing,leavingase】

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求雅思大作文修改...顺便打分

Rapidlyincreasingpetrolpricecouldprotecttheenvironmentandreleasetrafficpressuretosomeextent.Douagreeordisagree?Giveyouropinion.

In21stcentury,thepetrolpriceisrapidlygrowing,leavingaseriesofproblems.Somebelievethatit’sapositivewaytoalleviatetrafficjunctionsandprotecttheenvironment.However,othersopposite.Beforedrawingmyconclusion,let’stakeaglimpseatbothsides.

Tobeginwith,theincreasinglygrowingpetrolpricewouldsubliminallynegativelyaffectscultureeconomy.Forinstance,transportationfeewouldbedirectlyinfluenced,resultingthehighpriceofrawmaterialcollectingforthegovernments.Tocontinue,individualswouldsufferalotfromhighpetrolprice.One’sdailyactivitieswouldbelimited.Travellingaroundbyprivatecarasaafterworkamusementbecomeimpossibleduetothesky-highpetrolprice.Iimaginesomefolkswillbemorelikelytowalkthequarter-miletothe7-Eleventhantodrive.

However,asforbenefits,tobetrue,trafficcanbeeasyforregulatebecauseofthealternativetransportationspeoplewouldpreferring.Atthesametime,transportationcanbemoreefficient.Folkswouldpreferbusortrainastheirlong-wayjourneycarrier.Accordingly,environmentissueshouldbepartiallysolved.Highamountofexhaustgaswouldbenolongeractingasathreattotheozonelayerforcertain.

AsfarasIconcerned,undeniablely,itwouldbeastupidwaytosolvetrafficandenvironmentalproblemsbyenhancingthepetrolprice,foritscostsfarsuperbitsbenefits.Individualswouldbethevictimsatthefirstplace.Thereareseveralmorewiserwayswecandoaboutthis.suchassettingtheregulationsaboutvehiclelimitations,usingscientificmeanstoexploresomealternativefuels(sonarpowerisonitswaydeveloping,itisconsideredasthemainpowerinthefuture.).

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　　文章难度较大,要求悬赏100分.

蔡铁锋回答：

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　　可以，求修改..

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　　那你提高到100吧

蔡铁锋回答：

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　　提高了..

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　　Inthe(第XXX世纪前面都要用定冠词the)21stcentury,thepetrolpriceisrapidlygrowing,causing（leaving改为causing）aseriesofproblems.Somepeople（加上people，文中第一次出现。）believethatit’sapositivewaytoalleviatetrafficjunctionsandprotecttheenvironment.However,othersholdanoppositeview(这里不能这样省略)..Beforedrawingmyconclusion,Iwouldliketo（let’s改为Iwouldliketo，以与beforedrawing的逻辑主语相一致）takeaglimpseatbothsides.Tobeginwith,theincreasinglygrowingpetrolpricewouldsubliminallynegativelyaffectscultureeconomy.Forinstance,transportationfeewouldbedirectlyinfluenced,resultingthehighpriceofrawmaterialcollectingforthegovernments.Tocontinue,individualswouldsufferalotfromhighpetrolprice.One’sdailyactivitieswouldbelimited.Travellingaroundbyprivatecarasaafterworkamusementbecomeimpossibleduetothesky-highpetrolprice.Iimaginesomefolkswillbemorelikelytowalkthequarter-miletothe7-Eleventhantodrive.However,asforbenefits,tobetrue,trafficcanbeeasyforregulatebecauseofthealternativetransportationspeoplewouldpreferring.Atthesametime,transportationcanbemoreefficient.Folkswouldpreferbusortrainastheirlong-wayjourneycarrier.Accordingly,environmentissueshouldbepartiallysolved.Highamountofexhaustgaswouldbenolongeractingasathreattotheozonelayerforcertain.AsfarasIconcerned,undeniablely,itwouldbeastupidwaytosolvetrafficandenvironmentalproblemsbyenhancingthepetrolprice,foritscostsfarsuperbitsbenefits.Individualswouldbethevictimsatthefirstplace.Thereareseveralmorewiserwayswecandoaboutthis.suchassettingtheregulationsaboutvehiclelimitations,usingscientificmeanstoexploresomealternativefuels(sonarpowerisonitswaydeveloping,itisconsideredasthemainpowerinthefuture.).长度限制啊，不能再输入，你联系我的HI吧

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