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求高人改考研作文!跪谢!

能顺便帮我评个等级分吗?

Aswecanseeinthepicture,Apyramid

standtallanderect,withasentencewrittenbelowit---Thepyramidwasbuilt

withonestonepiledonanother.

Inmyopinion,whatthedrawingconveysisthespirit

ofperseverance.Justasthesayinggoes,“Romewasnotbuiltinaday”.Anygreat

achievementisn’tdonewithindaysandmonths.Therefore,weshouldmake

constantlyeffortsandneverstopprogressing.Onlybymakingefforts

constantlycanweachieveonesuccessafteranother.Thuswecangainasenseof

achievementandmakeagreatercontributiontothesociety.

Manypeople,ancientorcontemporary,Chineseor

foreign,havedisplayedthisspirit.OnofthebestexampleisthegroupofChinese

scientistswhowereresponsibleforthebuildingofShenzhouVspacecraft,

spentnearly30yearsbeforethesuccessfullaunchofshenzhouVspacecraft.In

myopinion,thespiritofperseveranceisessentialtothehumanrace,itis

thespiritthatallowsustoovercomeonedifficultyafteranotherandmoveus

forwardconstantly.

刘茂华回答:
  最后一段字数过多,中间段字数太少,比例不合理.   看到你这篇作文就想起我当年的考研生活啊.
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