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Aswecanseeinthepicture,Apyramid
standtallanderect,withasentencewrittenbelowit---Thepyramidwasbuilt
withonestonepiledonanother.
Inmyopinion,whatthedrawingconveysisthespirit
ofperseverance.Justasthesayinggoes,“Romewasnotbuiltinaday”.Anygreat
achievementisn’tdonewithindaysandmonths.Therefore,weshouldmake
constantlyeffortsandneverstopprogressing.Onlybymakingefforts
constantlycanweachieveonesuccessafteranother.Thuswecangainasenseof
achievementandmakeagreatercontributiontothesociety.
Manypeople,ancientorcontemporary,Chineseor
foreign,havedisplayedthisspirit.OnofthebestexampleisthegroupofChinese
scientistswhowereresponsibleforthebuildingofShenzhouVspacecraft,
spentnearly30yearsbeforethesuccessfullaunchofshenzhouVspacecraft.In
myopinion,thespiritofperseveranceisessentialtothehumanrace,itis
thespiritthatallowsustoovercomeonedifficultyafteranotherandmoveus
forwardconstantly.
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