高中英语改错急!
istillrememberthemorning.myfathersuddenlywakemeupatabout5andskywasstillgray.ijumpedoutbedsurprisedandextremehappy,forweweregoingtogetthebook.whenx0cwedrovetothebookstore,manypeoplewerealreadwatitingthere.wewaitedforourturnatabout8:30.iwasoverjoyedwhenigotthebook,notonlybecauseofthebookthemselves,butalsoofthelovefrommyfather.neverbeforehadifeelsuchalovefromhim,becauseofmyfather,ibelievedthen,hadalwaybusywithhisownwork.thatwas“harrypotter”thathelpedifeelthedeeplovefrommyparents.一共有十处错误!有些应该大写的由于时间关系没大写!那不算错误!
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