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帮忙改改英语作文Myunforgettabletrip初二(5)班吴宁然OnJuly2008,IwenttoEnglandwithmymothertoseemyfather.Hewasstudiedthere.Wewenttomanyinterestingplaces.FirstIvisitedthesmalltownwelived.It’snotasbigas
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Myunforgettabletrip

初二(5)班吴宁然

OnJuly2008,IwenttoEnglandwithmymothertoseemyfather.Hewasstudiedthere.Wewenttomanyinterestingplaces.

FirstIvisitedthesmalltownwelived.It’snotasbigasZibo.Butit’sbeautiful.Weboughtmanythings,suchastelephonecard,food,clothes,andsoon.NextwewenttoCambridgeandOxford.It’sbiggerthananyschoolinChina.ThenwewenttoLondon.It’sthecapitalofEngland.Wesawmanyoldbuildings,suchastheBigBen,theTowerBridge.Therearemanynewbuildings,theLondonEyeandsoonon.AtlastIvisitedtheBirmingham,andsawtheAtlanticOcean.Butwedidn’tswim,becausetheweatherwascold.Ithinkthereisn’tanydifferentbetweentheAtlanticOceanandthePacificOcean.

AndIfoundoneinteresting:InEnglandit’swarmandhumidinsummer.Thetemperatureisabout15℃~20℃.Itrainedcontinually.It’sagoodplacetospendthesummerholidayforChinesepeople.

Ithinkmytripwasfantastic.Ienjoyitalot.Ifyouwantknowmoreabutmytrip,youcancometomuhome,andIcanshowthephotostoyou.

崔光佐回答:
  总的来说,写的不错.但有一些地方需要修改:OnJuly2008改为InJuly2008Hewasstudiedthere改为Hewasstudyingthere,andsoon去掉前面的逗号theBirmingham不用加thethereisn’tanydifferentdiffer...
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