雅思大作文求批改,语法什么的,随意指正吧.哎.快考了.纠结啊.
社会(平均寿命)
Topic:Surveyshowsthatinmanycountriesacrossthepeoplearelivinglongerbutincreasedlifeexpectancyhasmanyimplicationsfortheagingindividualsandforsocietyasawhole.whatarethepossibleeffectoflongerlivingforindividualsandsociety?
Thepastfewdecadeshavewitnessedadramaticincreaseinhumanlifespan,whichcanbedirectlyattributedtomedicaladvances,increasinglevelsofeducationandeconomicprosperity.Inthisessay,Iintendtoexploresomepossibleeffectsofrisingaveragelifespan.
Fistofall,itisanundeniablefactthatlongerlifeisinthebestinterestofindividuals.Regardlessofsomepsychologicaloreconomicproblems,whichoccasionallyseenamongoldpeoplewhostayalonewithoutchildrenorlackofessentialsourceofincomes,mostofushavebenefitedgreatlyfromthistrend.Specifically,totheoldpeoplethemselves,theyhavemoretimetopursuittheirideals,aswellasaccompanytheirfamilies.Meanwhile,tothechildren,theyhavemoreenergytostudyandwork,therebycontributingtosociety,forthesakeofwellbeingofthoseoldpeopleintheirfamily.However,aslongerlifewecanhave,itseemsthat,heavierburdenwehavetotake.
Ontheotherhand,thisinescapabletrendalsogiverisetotheproblemofpopulationaginginthewholesociety.Aagingsocietyisasocietylackoflabourforce,wichwouldleadtoaseriesofsevereconsequencesanddiscouragethedevelopmentofhumanity.Moreover,inordertoassistantpublicpeopleandreducingtheirfinancialburden,governmenthavetoallocatealargeamountofmoney,anditisthisfundthatcouldoriginallyusedinmoreessentialareas,suchaseducation,resourceandenergycrisis.Accordingpopularnewssources,thelargestproportionoffinancialchargeInthemostofyearofUnitedStateshasbeenoccupiedbythepensionexpenditure,whichwasdefensespendingtraditionally.
Inconclusion,thisisclearlyaproblemofsuchcomplexitythatnodirectsolutionislikelyinshortterm.However,Iamconvincedthatthemajorsolutiontotheproblemlieswiththeeconomicdevelopmentofsociety.
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