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DearSir,I'mgladtolearnthatpart-timeassistantswerewantedinyourstudioandI'dliketohaveatry.I'mastudentwhoisgraduatedfromhighschoolsoon.Beforeattendingthecollege,I'llhavealongholidayandI&ap
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Dear Sir,

I'm glad to learn that part-time assistants were wanted in your studio and I'd like to have a try.I'm a student who is graduated from high school soon.Before attending the college,I'll have a long holiday and I'm determined to make the best of them.Since childhood,I have developed a strong interest in storytelling and watching films.My teacher thinks high of my performance in the language class,when I have also acquired a good knowledge of American movie industry.Except that,I am monitor of my class and thus have gained many experience in management.

I will undertake full responsibility and spare no effort to do my share of work.I am fully convinced that through communication with the staffs,I can get some valuable work experience as well as develop my social skills.

I'm looking forward to receiving your reply soon.Thank you for your consider.

Yours,

Li Hua.

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  DearSir,   I'mgladtolearnthatpart-timeassistantswerewantedinyourstudioandI'dliketohaveatry.I'mastudentwhoisgraduatedfromhighschoolsoon.Beforeattendingthecollege,I'llhavealongholidayandI'mdeterminedtomakethebestofthem.Sincechildhood,Ihavedevelopedastronginterestinstorytellingandwatchingfilms.Myteacherthinkshighofmyperformanceinthelanguageclass,whenIhavealsoacquiredagoodknowledgeofAmericanmovieindustry.Exceptthat,Iammonitorofmyclassandthushavegainedmanyexperienceinmanagement.   Iwillundertakefullresponsibilityandsparenoefforttodomyshareofwork.Iamfullyconvincedthatthroughcommunicationwiththestaffs,Icangetsomevaluableworkexperienceaswellasdevelopmysocialskills.   I'mlookingforwardtoreceivingyourreplysoon.Thankyouforyourconsider.   Yours,   LiHua.   详   1.were改为are;时态错误.句意表达的是说话时的事实,要用一般现在时态.   2.graduated改为graduating;分词错误.句中graduate与主语I构成主谓关系,要用表示主动的现在分词和系动词一起构成进行时态.   3.the去掉;冠词错误.attendcollege上大学,固定短语.   4.them改为it;逻辑指代错误.句意指代的是前面提到的holiday,要用it来指代.   5.high改为highly;副词错误.句中high修饰动词think,要用副词形式.   6.when改为where;连词错误.句中IhavealsoacquiredagoodknowledgeofAmericanmovieindustry修饰名词class,是一个定语从句;先行词class表示抽象地点,要用where来引导.   7.Except改为Besides;介词错误.句意表达的是除了…还有,要用besides来表示;except表示除了…之外就没有了.   8.many改为much;形容词错误.句中experience是不可数名词,要用much来修饰.   9.staffs改为staff;名词错误.staff本身就是复数,表示全体职员.   10.consider改为consideration;名词错误.句中consider作介词for的宾语,要用名词形式.
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