我的作文第一段,请老师批改.(1)CellPhone(手机)
BaseyourcompositionontheoutlinegivenbelowinChinese:
1.手机已成为一种最普遍(popular)的通讯(communications)工具.
2.随着科学技术(scienceandtechnology)的发展,手机的服务功能(function)更加多样化了.
3.手机前途光明.
CellPhone
Inmordensociety,thecellphoneplaysamoreandmoreimportantrolesinpeople'sdailylife.Thecellphoneisbecomeoneofthemostpopularcommunicationstoolsintheworld.
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