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【请点评以下作文,给出完善建议.看图作文,给了两张图:图1:1900年,一条渔船行驶在海面上,海水中有很多鱼图2:2000年,很多渔船行驶在拥挤的海面上,而海水中只有一条鱼作文如下,请点评:Int】
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请点评以下作文,给出完善建议.

看图作文,给了两张图:

图1:1900年,一条渔船行驶在海面上,海水中有很多鱼

图2:2000年,很多渔船行驶在拥挤的海面上,而海水中只有一条鱼

作文如下,请点评:

Inthepicture,twomodelsareclearlydemonstrated,showingushowtheoceanconditionsamazinglychangedduringnearlyacentury’stime.Inthefirstpicture,theshipissailingcalmlyontheseawhileschoolsoffishareswimminginthesea.Inthesecondpicture,thesituationsharplyswerves,withonlyonefishleftinthesea,thesurfaceoftheseahasbeenswarmedwithships.

Foralmostacentury,theworld’spopulationhasbeenonandonswellingandtherisinglivingstandards,people’sdemandfortheseafoodisgoingup.Tremendousoverfishinghasbeendoneallaroundtheoceans,whichcausedthemarinecreaturesendupwithextinction.Andthemodernfishingtechniqueshastenthespeedofthemarinelife’sdecrease.Sothedrawerexpresseshismindinasarcasticwaybyshowingusthesecondpicture,suggestingthatifmancontinuesinthisway,theoceanswillbeemptyultimately.

Tokeeptheseainanecologicalbalanceisourcommonwish.Sofeasiblemeasuresmustbetakenallovertheworld.Firstly,overfishingshouldbeprohibited.Secondly,wemustpaymoreattentiononthoseendangeredseaspecies.Thirdly,someover-exploitationshouldbesimultaneouslybannedtokeeptheoceanfrombeingpolluted.Theearthisourhomeland,whichispartlymadeupbytheoceans,toloveandtoprotecttheoceansisundoubtedlybenefitingourselves.

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  恩,描绘的很好,但有需改进
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