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我写了一篇作文,谁帮我看看,找些错误(我才初一啊)IhaveadreamWhenlamboy,lwanttobeanastronaut.Ithinkitisveryinterestingandfunny.butnowIamdiffident,Ithinkitistoohard.Ihavenotanyhope.SoIhaveanewdream:
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我写了一篇作文,谁帮我看看,找些错误(我才初一啊)

Ihaveadream

Whenlamboy,lwanttobeanastronaut.Ithinkitisveryinterestingandfunny.butnowIamdiffident,Ithinkitistoohard.Ihavenotanyhope.SoIhaveanewdream:Iwillbeaneconomist.MybeyouaresurpisedwhyIwanttobeaneconomist.letmetellyou:Inwinterhoilday,Ireadabook(货币战争).Ittalksabouttheeconomics’shistoryandfact.Itisreallyinterestingandexciting.Butitistoodepthandmybeyouwillbeapoorman.Ireadthisbookallhoilday,itisgivemethetruewaytotheconfidence.Anditisalsodifficult.ButIdonotgiveup.IthinkIwillbeagoodeconomist.Beausethatismyfavouritejob.WhenIhaveadream,itcantellmehowtobesuccess.SoatthefirstIwillstudyinXiaMenUniversityorRenMinUniversitythenIwillgoabroadtolearnmore.Next,Iwillworkinabanktobearichman.AtlastIwillworkatWallStreet.Iwillmakemylifecolorful,thatismylastdream.Ilookforwardtothefuturewithconfidence.

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  Ihavenotanyhope这句错应改为:Idon'thaveanyhopeIttalksabouttheeconomics’shistoryandfactfact改为factsitisgivemethetruewaytotheconfidence这句错应改为:itgivesmethetruewayto...
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